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Thursday, 3 July 2014

Superhero Creative Writing

Hi my name is Aoli Sweet, I am 17 years old. People don’t know I have super abilities, I got them when I turned 12. I wished and wished when I was young for superpowers and it came true. I have good abilities, my first super power is a laser that comes out of my eyes.


This afternoon I was having a quick nap til’ I heard a very, very, big sound. It kind of sounded like a lamb choking on a carrot. I got up very quick rushing to my window, all I saw was a black sky with grey & white sparkles. I was terrified because of the sky color but I got over it and rushed downstairs to the front door. “Oh no... it’s you again!” I said with fear. “Yes, it is I, Rick Port! I am here to stop you and make sure you will never be heard of again!” he said.
Rick Port is a guy I’ve been enemies with since 4th grade. I was using a chalk color that he wanted but I never gave it, I was doing my own artwork. He started pushing me and crying but I just stood there with the chalk. Anyway, what happened was he rushed into my house grabbing my neck and pushing me to the wall. I was terrified and struggled to get out. Nothing worked, so I used my powers and made lasers come out of my eyes. He stepped back trying not to get burnt, he ran to my phone called his backup then he smashed it. I was seriously fearful.

I ran to my room, locked the door but he just got in, somehow. I was very scared, so I jumped out of the window, bad luck, I fell splat on my face, OUCH! Ugh.



I got up and ran to a random persons house and locked their door. I started to get embarrassed. “Oh… Uh… I…I… I uhm… I thought this was -” I got cut off by the person. “Stop, who are you?” they said. “I am… I am… I am Aoli Sweet, a girl who is getting defeated by my enemy…” I replied. “There’s no such thing as enemies or superheros, the only thing that is real in this world is peace, not war” The person told me with a smile.


I realised there was only one thing to do… I had to stop this madness. “Thank you for telling me that, I have a NEW job to do. Goodbye!” I said unlocking the door. “You’re very welcome, goodbye!” he said as I rushed out the door. I went up to my enemy and said “Stop right there! I know we are enemies and all but this world needs peace & love, not war. We should stop and just be friends. I’m sorry, Rick,” I said with a frown. Rick looked at me and said, “I’m sorry too, Aoli. I want to be friends again, let’s pinkie promise we won’t fight again”. We did a pinkie promise.


We became best friends and played together all day. I hope you guys who are reading this can sort this out with your enemy.


And that was how I became best friends with my enemy.

Thursday, 19 June 2014

'Summer Is Here!'

Summer Is Here!
“Summer is here!” I shouted out from my room excitedly. I really wanted to go to the beach. I looked out the window for a few seconds. Then I burst downstairs rushing to the kitchen to ask my mum if I could go, I did the puppy eyes. My mum glared into my eyes and said, “Yes, you can go to the beach.  But remember, get shoes before going onto the sand! It may burn your feet!”.

I forgot all about my shoes, because I was too excited. I rushed out the door, I got my cellphone and texted my best friends. ‘Come to the beach, I’ll be there!’. They all texted back. ‘Sure, we just need to get ready. We’ll be there by 4 o’clock’.

I was like fire as I ran to the beach, leaving footprints on the grass. I finally got the beach. I took one step on the sand, 2 steps, 3. Each step felt like I was standing on lava. My feet were red, very red. I stared at my feet. I sprinted to the water as quick as I could, “Ahhhh….. That’s better” I said.

My phone time hit 4 o’clock, my friends finally came. They had immediately saw me standing in the water. They ran down to me, “Why are you in the water now? I thought it would of been cold!” one of them said. “Well…..” I was embarrassed. My friends stared at me. They didn’t care, so they ran into the water and splashed me.

It started to get late, so we all went home. We had the best day EVER!

Wednesday, 18 June 2014

Tuesday, 17 June 2014

My boat

This is my front view and side view.
And this is my Birds Eye View(:

This is my boat in the water