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Thursday 19 June 2014

'Summer Is Here!'

Summer Is Here!
“Summer is here!” I shouted out from my room excitedly. I really wanted to go to the beach. I looked out the window for a few seconds. Then I burst downstairs rushing to the kitchen to ask my mum if I could go, I did the puppy eyes. My mum glared into my eyes and said, “Yes, you can go to the beach.  But remember, get shoes before going onto the sand! It may burn your feet!”.

I forgot all about my shoes, because I was too excited. I rushed out the door, I got my cellphone and texted my best friends. ‘Come to the beach, I’ll be there!’. They all texted back. ‘Sure, we just need to get ready. We’ll be there by 4 o’clock’.

I was like fire as I ran to the beach, leaving footprints on the grass. I finally got the beach. I took one step on the sand, 2 steps, 3. Each step felt like I was standing on lava. My feet were red, very red. I stared at my feet. I sprinted to the water as quick as I could, “Ahhhh….. That’s better” I said.

My phone time hit 4 o’clock, my friends finally came. They had immediately saw me standing in the water. They ran down to me, “Why are you in the water now? I thought it would of been cold!” one of them said. “Well…..” I was embarrassed. My friends stared at me. They didn’t care, so they ran into the water and splashed me.

It started to get late, so we all went home. We had the best day EVER!

4 comments:

  1. Great work putting your ideas into paragraphs with support Amber. Keep up the creative writing.

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    1. Thank you, Mrs. Jacobsen ^^
      I will keep up the Creative Writing(:

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  2. Great work! Amber keep up the good work!!!

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    1. Thanks Shavana, I will keep up the great work!! Heading to your blog :3

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